I have been making poetry for some time now,and i want you to judge me!

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Here i have posted a link to one of my pieces.I will post more below.

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This one ^(here) is probably my best.The next and last one im gong to post is my least favorite.

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This one is my least favorite because its so wierd in my mind.

Please tell me what you think of them in the comments below,i'd be happy with any.



Thanks!
-Eric